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The Little Fox

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Posted 31 July 2010 - 06:39 PM

This is my first time wrighting a story so please let me know what you think.
The Little Fox
I didn't know how it happened but I was in the water fighting waves that were like 15 feet or more. I watched one big wave rise above me as it crashed on top of me I fell on top of something hard as I woke I found out that it was the floor I fell on. I got up from the floor and sat on the bed to try to figure out why I had that dream. After about half an hour I made my way to the kitchen table and sat down. It was early in the morning the sun wasn't up yet so I went to take a shower and wake up a little more. The shower felt good as I was drying my fur I still didn't have an answer to the dream that I had. After I finished drying off I made a little breakfast. After I finish breakfast I washed all dishes than went to make my bed and then decided to go outside to watch the sun rise out on the swing. It was a beautiful sun rise with reds oranges pinks and a little bit of yellow. As I sat there on the swing another fur was walking down to the lake to go fishing by the look of it he had the normal stuff fishing pole and tackle box and something that wasn't ordinary for fishing a small cage. As he walked I tried to see what was in the cage and there was a micro fur with white fur I had an idea what was going to become of him but I wasn't going to stop him I might be a wolf but he was bigger than I was being a bear and I wouldn't stand a chance against the bear to help the little fur so I just watched him walk out of sight. I went back inside to do some work around the cabin time flew by because I happen to look at the clock and it said that it was after seven and I was getting hungry. I got ready and went and got something to eat when I got back it was after eight and I thought that I would go for a swim at the beach. When I got to the beach there was no one there but the wind had picked up since this morning and there was a now white cap on the lake but I still went for a swim. I was in the lake for like an hour I got out to dry off and watch the sun set as I sat on the beach watching the sun set something in the water caught my attention something being thrown around by the waves as it got closes to me I could see that I was something white. I watched it in the water as it got closer and closer to shore as it got closer to shore I still couldn't make out what it was so I got up and went in to the water the water wasn't even up to my knees when I came up to the thing I saw and it surprised me there was a small fur hanging on to a small piece of wood. The little fur didn't know I was there until my tail moved in the water which caught the small furs attention seeing me towering above him must have drained any energy that he had left right out of him because he let go of the piece of wood and slipped under the waves I was quick to reach in and lift him out of the water he was still breathing but unconscious it was then that I remembered my dream last night the waves seemed small to me but as I looked out in to the lake the waves must be like 15 or more feet to the small fur he must be exhausted from fighting them. As looked at the little fur in my hand I thought that I had see him before than it came to me the white fur in cage the bear had this morning. As I looked at the fur in my hand I could tell that it was a fox fur and his fur was opposite color of mine white while mine is black I couldn't just leave him here he wouldn't make it through the night on the shore so I brought him home with me. When I got home I dried him off and put in on my bed while is showered and dried off once I was dry I looked in on him and he was still a sleep. I went and finished cleaning up for the night and went to bed as well as I got in to bed I looked at the little guy he seem to be quite relaxed to be in a soft and warm bed and not fighting the waves any more. When I woke in the morning the little fox was still there he hadn't moved or woken up and run off during the night I was happy to see he was still there. I carefully moved him from the bed to my hand then went out to the swing the sun was all ready up. As I sat on the swing hope the little fur wasn't hurt from fighting the waves yesterday and would wake up soon shortly after I thought that there was a movement in my hand. I didn't dare move or say anything is fear of scaring him but it didn't help because as he woke he saw that he was in my hand. Then he flip over and started moving away from me until he was up against my fingers shaking with fear I could only guest what he had been through and what he thought of me a giant wolf that he was at the Mersey of. We just stared at each other for several minutes not taking eyes off each other I thought that I should tell him that I wasn't going to hurt him so I told him that I was not going to hurt him it seam to comfort him a little because he did stopped shaking then the little fox slowly asked me in his little voice if I really wasn't going to hurt him and I told him that I had no intentions to do so. I thought that the little fur might be hungry after fighting the waves from yesterday so I asked him if he was hungry and he started shaking again he must of thought that I was going to eat him or something so I asked again in the softest tone I could I asked him if he was hungry and he stopped shaking and seemed surprised that I was asking him he just stared at me for a minute than in a little squeak he said yes I got up slowly and started walking for the cabin I knew that it was going be awhile before he wouldn't be scared of me and trust me but I knew that it would all come in time.


This post has been edited by Black Wolf: 02 August 2010 - 06:34 PM

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Posted 01 August 2010 - 08:06 PM

Great start please continue.
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